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Hi! I definitely like the story. But I also agree with other members, I reckon it's too short to be a story and it stems to some misunderstandings! My advice ...

Hi! I've said that like your style of writing! The porcelain doll seems to be a symbol! All in all it's great! Don't be shy to write more! It's a ...

Hello! You see, it's strange, but I do understand you! A lot of people can't understand creative one, can't get the idea from their works! But personally I like the ...

Hi, Cripple! Well, sorry I can't be objective towards your story, because I'm not keen on this kind of thing. You see it's like a conscription to someone. Truly said ...

Hi kite! I do like this story! At first it seems like a detective one, but till the end we begin to understand that we misunderstood you!))) But all in ...

Hello Twixt! For my part, you are really talented and don't lose your flair for description. Yes, your descriptions are really good, though I found it difficult to understand what ...

Hi! Well, including the fact that is the first part you should tell something about the character itself, not to start from the action. But firmly believe that this chapter ...

Well, the storyline is not so bad. It is readable and gripping, but you can't forget that it is a story, romantic story. So you need to use more descriptions ...

Hi! A great science-fiction I suppose. Though I amn't keen on fantasy, I read it with pleasure. Feels like it's not your first writing experience and You certainly have a ...

Hi! I do really like your story! Good job! You definately have a flair for writing romantic fiction. The story is not lackluster or plain, quite on the contrary - ...

For my part, I really like that. You see xKelle_Bellex, your little story as well as your style of writing are very alike to mine. No desriptions, no pre-story - ...

Hi! Well, I do like your story very much! Really! The manner you describe the action is rather coherent and understandable! I think every girl likes such and such things, ...

Very deep description of a man, not everybody can understand the metaphors. This story can easily be a part of your autobiography! I reckon you should think about it. My ...

It is a poem definitely about big love! Surely sometimes it brings us pain, but we mustn't;t forget that all in all love is a huge and sincere feeling! You ...

Well, what can i say on this? It is rather gripping and adventures. I like it, though i don't love adventures very much!) Considering the fact, that You write about ...